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a random white american moves to california to work, has no racism or noticing at first but gradually notices how his co-workers get fired for absurd reasons and frequently replaced by non whites who act savagely and redpills the main character who eventually either gets fired or moves away again. and yes, the ceo is a kike with awful people running the job interviews.

don't really have much else planned at the moment but there will be a neat line of developing this as it goes along.

thoughts?
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PurestEvil on scored.co
1 year ago 1 point (+0 / -0 / +1Score on mirror ) 1 child
A bit too close to reality... and as so far it lacks an interesting plot line. Look:

> and redpills the main character who eventually either gets fired or moves away again

This is a boring outcome for a fictional story.

Your character needs to revolt, reject the system, stand up against it, face adversity. You want your character to assume heroic traits, even if he has to work to get it.

Maybe he was a good boy all his life, doing what he was told, learning what he should, ran through the system, did everything that was expected from him, from teachers, parents, corporations, and one day - boom, he gets fired, divorced, depersoned, have set an example of, all for doing something mundane.

But he is smart and able to recognize patterns, or has some other kind of gift or experience that makes him notice. Maybe he decides to sit down and write down the names of all people, as their faces flashback to him (photographic memory or just a good memory?) who did good and bad to him. And then he notices a pattern.

Then he looks into the television, into politics, news, various facts, and notices the same pattern again.

After that he contests his newly found theories, it can't be true, it *may* not be true, or otherwise he'd be a massive fool.

What happens later? Will he become the modern era Hitler? A serial killer? Whatever it is, something *interesting* must happen.

If necessary, in order to maximize your reach before the censorship, you could do a "they are among us" thing where they do not turn out to be jews, but "aliens" or whatever. It's an analogy, and those who know, know, those who don't, will eventually find out.
Coronelington on scored.co
1 year ago 2 points (+0 / -0 / +2Score on mirror ) 1 child
interesting, i'll look into adding something like that. again, nothing firm has been decided yet
Rebooted on scored.co
1 year ago 0 points (+0 / -0 ) 1 child
I think the healthiest and firmest "win" should be him meeting a good, young white woman and getting married. You can close out the story with the birth of his first child, a son. Huge whitepill for two people to both overcome the soul-crushing decline and looting of their civilization, refuse to give up, and bring forth new good life into the world.
Coronelington on scored.co
1 year ago 0 points (+0 / -0 )
massive whitepill indeed considering the troublesome family this particular guy would grow up in
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