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Perseverance. (media.scored.co)
posted 1 month ago by Uncle_Adolf on scored.co (+0 / -0 / +29Score on mirror )
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steele2 on scored.co
1 month ago 3 points (+0 / -0 / +3Score on mirror ) 1 child
Nice message but too many words.

Needs to be more concise.

Something like:

# Stand firm, even when you stand alone.

*(I'd have mentioned Jesus or our traditional Christian values / culture too, but that's just me)*
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Tourgen on scored.co
1 month ago 1 point (+0 / -0 / +1Score on mirror ) 1 child
that strips most of the message out so it is more palatable to dumb people. there is some subtle meaning in the message. it's fine if most people aren't capable of understanding the message. it's not for them. they should talk less and get to work on time.
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steele2 on scored.co
1 month ago 1 point (+0 / -0 / +1Score on mirror )
The message still needs to be more concise.

Boil it down. Make it more potent and powerful / use the image to add nuance and context.
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