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[while we are at it] Some scenes i wrote some years back. Went back in and rewrote some, added, removed. Much better now. C&C welcome.
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Seriously, well done!
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It *is* smoother. This must be SO hard to do, much harder than painting or any of the other arts!
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Alright now, you can't leave me hangin', so get me some more! I like the way Elac and Mila interact, I can *see* them, you know?
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I like the antagonistic but affectionate tone between them, very much. :)
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