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whatlike_withacloth on scored.co
6 days ago4 points(+0/-0/+4Score on mirror)
>You didn’t need the devil to tempt you, you handed him the blade and carved the truth into your own mind
No, that's fucking dumb. First off, it's a run-on sentence (by way of a comma splice). There should be a semicolon where the comma is. I should know; my grammar and lit. teachers all through high school constantly deducted points for my bad habit of comma splicing.
Secondly, if you handed the devil the blade, how did you then carve the truth into your own mind? "...you handed him the blade and (you) carved the truth into your own mind." The subject is carried through the compound predicate and thus applies to both verbs.
A based AI would have the decency to at least have proper grammar when coming up with some Im14AndThisIsDeep bullshit.
No, that's fucking dumb. First off, it's a run-on sentence (by way of a comma splice). There should be a semicolon where the comma is. I should know; my grammar and lit. teachers all through high school constantly deducted points for my bad habit of comma splicing.
Secondly, if you handed the devil the blade, how did you then carve the truth into your own mind? "...you handed him the blade and (you) carved the truth into your own mind." The subject is carried through the compound predicate and thus applies to both verbs.
A based AI would have the decency to at least have proper grammar when coming up with some Im14AndThisIsDeep bullshit.